Appaloops

Forgive me for that awful name...

Agility Show Entry #1
Monica is set on making it to Nationals so she is going to have to make herself well known. She wants to gain as much experience for both herself and her pegasi so she wants to enter as many local shows as she can find. She thought her fast and agile mare Rhapsody would have a good chance at winning the agility show so she decided to give it a shot. It was an absolutely gorgeous evening, with the sun beginning to fall and paint the clouds with fiery colors. The mountains below, shaded by the colored clouds, took on a purple hue and a light fog hung over the land. The air was cool and Rhapsody was in a feisty mood. Monica managed to get her under control for take off and thus the timer began. She quickly guided the colorful mare through the long series of hoops. Rhapsody got fairly excitable being given the chance to fly at full speed and nearly got out of hand but Monica reined her in and kept her focused. They plummeted through hoop after hoop, and finally came to the end of the course. Although Rhapsody had gotten a little rambunctious, she had certainly made it through the course very quickly. Monica felt confidant they had been the fastest and waited for their final course time to be displayed.

I'm really enjoying this new art style I'm working with, I may keep it up. I'm certainly going to want to improve upon it but I like it for the time being. Also, yes, I realize how badly I messed up on the wing anatomy. Will be improving on that as well.

Score:
- Colored Detailed Shaded (painted, etc) = +20pt
- Simple Background (sky, shapes, gradients, etc) = +2pts
- Literature/story = +6pts (227 words)
- Extra characters = +3 pts (Monica)
- Non-polo show results: 3rd place, no points

Total score: 31 points

Pegasus: fav.me/d9qmut2
Rider: fav.me/d9qn0oo